We all know how important the first and last lines are in every chapter. This blogfest will hopefully get your HOOKERS and HANGERS polished making it impossible for readers to put down your book and leaving them begging for more!
On July 16th, we posted the first sentence from each chapter.
For today, July 18th, we are posting the last sentence from each chapter.
Post as many as you like!
They will be judging everyone's first 3 Hookers and Hangers.
I know I it's only the first 3 but just like Monday, I added another. I wanted to do every Hanger but gave up on that. I decided to make this as painless as possible.
CH. 1 - "I know the perfect place to put her staff,” the blonde mutters as the three of them step into the light.
CH. 2 - Maybe a nice corner in the back of my closet would be comfortable.
CH. 5 - “If that’s the case,” I stared at the strangers as they strolled away, “she needs to work on that. It has got to be the worst I’m-sorry-for-your-loss face I’ve ever seen.”
CH. 8 - The three men marched back into the woods from where they ascended.
LOL. Love the voice and the closet remark :) Very clever, and left me hanging to read more. Very impressed. :)
ReplyDeleteFab work, especially the first one!
ReplyDeleteCh. 5 made me chuckle. I'm wondering what happened right before that.
ReplyDeleteNice! Especially loved chapters 2 & 5!
ReplyDeletescary scene enders! nice job!
ReplyDeleteLove the attitude in 2 and 5!
ReplyDeleteI giggled at the first one. Must be my dirty mind, lol.
ReplyDeleteI love the chapter 5 hanger. Too funny!
ReplyDeleteNumber 5 hanger made me laugh. Classic.
ReplyDeleteChapter 5 was my favorite!! :)
ReplyDeleteHA! You have a brilliant way with words!
ReplyDeleteI LOVE ch. 2's hanger!
ReplyDeleteMy favourites were the first two, both so funny :D
ReplyDeleteThese are great! Look forward to reading more.
ReplyDeleteThose first three had me rolling! Love the voice! Great hangers!
ReplyDeleteTotally giggling on that first one! Loved it:)
ReplyDeleteI like the "I'm-sorry-for-your-loss face." That made me smile. I like the way your MC thinks. :)
ReplyDelete2 and 5 made me laugh! This sounds like a fun read!
ReplyDeleteThanks guys and dolls! You are all so kind!
ReplyDeleteThese are really strong! Great voice!!
ReplyDeleteAttitude! and more! #1 is my pick but #5 is good too!
ReplyDeleteChapter 5. I want to know why they are faking grief faces. Are they hustling a funeral?
ReplyDelete#2 could be either funny or forlorn. The MC has a spicy attitude and that makes for a great read:)
ReplyDelete"I know the perfect place to put her staff,” the blonde mutters as the three of them step into the light. - Was my fave hanger, Who wouldn't want to read on after that. Cool work.
ReplyDeleteI like these hangers, especially 2 and 5. :)
ReplyDeleteThese are all really good, but I think #2 is my fave :)
ReplyDeleteThe second one makes me wonder why they need to get in a closet and the next one made me chuckle.
ReplyDeleteThanks for joining us!
This. Is. Awesome.
ReplyDelete"I know the perfect place to put her staff,” the blonde mutters as the three of them step into the light.
I'm pretty sure I get the gist of it and am IN LOVE with the voice :)
"Maybe a nice corner in the back of my closet would be comfortable."
ReplyDeleteThat alone will keep me reading. Awesome hangers! :)