tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post2584958841224838614..comments2024-01-24T03:33:01.837-05:00Comments on Entertaining Interests: Dust It Off Bloghop- Excerpt YA HorrorDanihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-56889607920071527942012-05-07T14:30:57.109-04:002012-05-07T14:30:57.109-04:00Oh wow! So many comments! Thanks guys! Yuu are so ...Oh wow! So many comments! Thanks guys! Yuu are so wonderful and I appreciate all the sweet things you say. <br /><br />No kid is over the age of 13 and it gets darker and creepier from here.<br /><br />Thanks again to all of you!Danihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11026644605799767199noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-9473261289416426552012-05-06T13:31:25.075-04:002012-05-06T13:31:25.075-04:00So exciting! They sound young, like no one over 1...So exciting! They sound young, like no one over 15. Am I close? :)Shiela Calderón Blankemeierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05164253791139502033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-64648731965569016762012-05-06T12:53:08.621-04:002012-05-06T12:53:08.621-04:00I'm on the edge of my seat! :)I'm on the edge of my seat! :)Kelley Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06373650788799372118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-91368116227316443782012-05-06T03:38:03.654-04:002012-05-06T03:38:03.654-04:00Super creepy. I want to read more.Super creepy. I want to read more.Sheena-kay Grahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17712661419116636671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-77356444469540831202012-05-05T22:56:39.644-04:002012-05-05T22:56:39.644-04:00ah! what happens next?!ah! what happens next?!Tara Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07587802105993889515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-81977800324141443102012-05-05T22:51:29.216-04:002012-05-05T22:51:29.216-04:00I love how the voices come across, and the situati...I love how the voices come across, and the situation being set up. It makes me want to know more.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-5512504184834914542012-05-05T21:45:40.309-04:002012-05-05T21:45:40.309-04:00What a tense way to start your story!What a tense way to start your story!Kate Larkindalehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06202347563426692610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-63312786921727390452012-05-05T21:25:14.246-04:002012-05-05T21:25:14.246-04:00OO...nice cliffhanger. Great job.OO...nice cliffhanger. Great job.E. Arroyohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06634213563563094173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-78829064992127465542012-05-05T19:17:00.558-04:002012-05-05T19:17:00.558-04:00I like the dialogue. It feels real.I like the dialogue. It feels real.McKenzie McCannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11707799179783394809noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-54593568343965289682012-05-05T17:33:12.429-04:002012-05-05T17:33:12.429-04:00Great way to start a ms, leaving me with so many q...Great way to start a ms, leaving me with so many questions. I feel for them and how tired and emotionally drained they are. And what a way to end an excerpt!Theresahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10957479478228268972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-36422901542500776302012-05-05T14:51:29.825-04:002012-05-05T14:51:29.825-04:00Oh, my ... I want more! What's happening?!
Gr...Oh, my ... I want more! What's happening?! <br />Great beginning, but now I want the rest! lolJuliana Haygerthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18028869545185578038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-53789809833481815342012-05-05T14:43:22.589-04:002012-05-05T14:43:22.589-04:00Oh, awesome! Love the tension and the cliffhanger ...Oh, awesome! Love the tension and the cliffhanger you left us with.Christine Rainshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08263694662585963900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-19488689198597902082012-05-05T14:36:40.256-04:002012-05-05T14:36:40.256-04:00What an exciting opening. Really catches the atten...What an exciting opening. Really catches the attention.Esther Joneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07688983385593428361noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-5158210822341142702012-05-05T13:32:05.119-04:002012-05-05T13:32:05.119-04:00Definitely creepy. :)Definitely creepy. :)Rachel Schieffelbeinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01629400142880123520noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-49381663313444586502012-05-05T11:55:57.659-04:002012-05-05T11:55:57.659-04:00Nice excerpt! Definitely sets up something excitin...Nice excerpt! Definitely sets up something exciting!Elizabeth Briggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14572251749088056704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-2965353832955314282012-05-05T11:55:26.528-04:002012-05-05T11:55:26.528-04:00Awesome beginning for your story. Good job!Awesome beginning for your story. Good job!Jackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04526192448146446752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-67360190603822988492012-05-05T11:53:37.805-04:002012-05-05T11:53:37.805-04:00This is great. I think you've really captured ...This is great. I think you've really captured the feeling of youth in this. The ending really made me want to find out what happens next!<br /><br />AndreaAndrea Teaganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02050710871603076745noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-21228664795688392572012-05-05T11:27:34.915-04:002012-05-05T11:27:34.915-04:00Ooo, definitely creepy! This is a good start!Ooo, definitely creepy! This is a good start!Cortney Pearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00774060537148628453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-46361935019033168512012-05-05T11:24:35.499-04:002012-05-05T11:24:35.499-04:00Love the lingo. Sounds like you've created a f...Love the lingo. Sounds like you've created a fabulous world! :DMorganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15747144518868320969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-56052218956344887872012-05-05T10:56:14.752-04:002012-05-05T10:56:14.752-04:00Good start, right in with the action. But how did ...Good start, right in with the action. But how did they get out of the house with all the creepers swarming?Suzihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16502606950280751205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5746252721462765153.post-49195106037621990582012-05-05T10:47:44.960-04:002012-05-05T10:47:44.960-04:00This is a strong beginning, it made me want to kno...This is a strong beginning, it made me want to know more!Kyra Lennonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13853462182450429660noreply@blogger.com